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이연숙/2025-03-27

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Question: Why we should do art? Answer: Art help our knowledge and we can get talent of art.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Yeonsuk.

Good point however let me just paraphrase it.

~Teacher Jess

Art help our knowledge and we can get talent of art.

>> Art helps expand our knowledge and nurtures our artistic talents.