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Do you think it's important to express or acknowledge feelings of disappointment or frustration?

최서연/2025-03-27

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Of course! We need to interpret our emotions and its relation. All people are dominated by their own emotion, so they have to understand why they have those emotions in order not to tie by emotion without rational. Rare emotions cause us confuse or make unexpected or unintentional mistake. Therefore, we want to manage our emotions well. Then, it's important to express or acknowledge emotions that can be described as somewhat negative. Hopefully and repeatedly, disappointment, frustration and feeling shame let us develop in the process of trying to escape from them. Even if I experience something shameful, embarrassing, or frustrating, I normally tend to console myself by saying that I can learn something from it.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Seo Yeon~

I only hope that we always exercise caution while expressing our emotions since we should be responsible for the consequences. I have to agree that there are still good things to learn from disappointment; we simply need to learn to see the bright side of things.

Chammy

Of course! We need to interpret our emotions and its relation.

>> Of course! We need to interpret our emotions and their relation.

>> We must be aware of our emotions and their effects.

All people are dominated by their own emotion, so they have to understand why they have those emotions in order not to tie by emotion without rational.

>> All people are dominated by their own emotions, so they have to understand why they have those emotions in order not to tie by emotion without rationale.

>> Since everyone is responsible for their emotions, it is important for them to learn the reasons behind them to avoid acting irrationally.

Rare emotions cause us confuse or make unexpected or unintentional mistake.

>>Rare emotions cause us to confuse or make unexpected or unintentional mistakes.

Therefore, we want to manage our emotions well.

>> So, we desire to control our emotions effectively.

Then, it's important to express or acknowledge emotions that can be described as somewhat negative.

>> It is also critical to address or communicate feelings that can be characterized as potentially adverse.

Hopefully and repeatedly, disappointment, frustration and feeling shame let us develop in the process of trying to escape from them.

>> Hopefully and repeatedly, disappointment, frustration, and shame let us develop in the process of trying to escape from them.

>> Hopefully disappointment, frustration, and shame, allow us to grow as we attempt to overcome them.

Even if I experience something shameful, embarrassing, or frustrating, I normally tend to console myself by saying that I can learn something from it.

>> Correct