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What’s the most memorable family gathering you’ve attended?

이진태/2025-03-26

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I can remeber the family gathering. My grandfather past away on end of the april. so my family gather every April. We have had memorial time for my grandfather and grandmother.
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Hi! I’m thrilled that you took the time to complete the homework. Your experiences and ideas were shared wonderfully—keep up the fantastic work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I can remeber the family gathering.
>> I can remember the family gathering. 
OR >> I still recall the family gathering.

My grandfather past away on end of the april. so my family gather every April.
>> My grandfather passed away at the end of April, so my family gathers every April. 

We have had memorial time for my grandfather and grandmother.
>> We have a memorial time for both my grandfather and grandmother.
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