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What's the most exciting musical instrument to play?Why?

차진혁/2025-03-25

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think the very most exciting to play musical instrument is piano because piano is singing voice is very good. So I think the piano is very exciting to play musical instrument.
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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below. Enjoy the rest of the evening! 


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Jean~~




                               
                              

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I think the very most exciting to play musical instrument is piano because piano is singing voice is very good.
>> I think the most exciting musical instrument to play is the piano because the sound it creates is incredible. 

So I think the piano is very exciting to play musical instrument.
>> So I think the piano is the most exciting musical instrument to play. 
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