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What are the benefits of taking the work shuttle bus?

이승훈/2025-03-25

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
benefits of taking the work shuttle bus are about three benifits. fisrt, can to save oil my vechicle. i can eat delicious food, save oil money. second, while taking the work shuttle bus, i some sleep. although i taking a shuttle bus time is short, but when i tired, i can short sleep. third, i can watching youtube on the mobile phone. suitable watching shorts videos.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Hun!
I completely agree with you! Taking the shuttle bus helps you save money on fuel, and at the same time, it can let you spend your time doing other things, like taking a nap or watching online. For me, this is what I love about taking public transportation as well—I get to do other things because I am not the one driving.
- T. Caitlyn 
benefits of taking the work shuttle bus are about three benifits.
>> There are three advantages of taking the work shuttle bus.
fisrt, can to save oil my vechicle.
>> First, I can save fuel for my vehicle.
i can eat delicious food, save oil money.
>> I can eat delicious food and save money on fuel.
second, while taking the work shuttle bus, i some sleep.
>> Second, while taking the work shuttle bus, I can get some sleep.
although i taking a shuttle bus time is short, but when i tired, i can short sleep.
>> Although the shuttle bus ride is short, when I am tired, I can take a quick nap.
third, i can watching youtube on the mobile phone.
>> Third, I can watch YouTube on my mobile phone.
suitable watching shorts videos.
>> It is suitable for watching short videos.
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