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Do you know your own family tree?

한다연/2025-03-24

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Yes I do! I know my own family tree. Our family tree is connected by last name in Korea. So, My own family tree is connected by 'Han'. The 'Han' is the only family tree in Korea unlike the other family tree. So there is a law in the past that we must not marry with each other. But it's okay in present. I am so happy to meet a person who has a last name 'Han'.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Nicole! 

Your family tree is indeed one of a kind. 
I never thought that family trees really do exist. 
I don't even have our family tree. 

Andrea 

Yes I do! I know my own family tree.
>> Yes, I know my own family tree. 

Our family tree is connected by last name in Korea.
>> In Korea, a family tree is connected by our last name. 

So, My own family tree is connected by 'Han'.
>> So, my own family tree is connected by 'Han". 

The 'Han' is the only family tree in Korea unlike the other family tree.
>> "Han" is the only unique family tree in Korea. 
>> "Han" has a different family tree compared to other family trees in Korea. 
 
So there is a law in the past that we must not marry with each other. But it's okay in present.
>> So, there was a law in the past that we shall not marry each other.
 
I am so happy to meet a person who has a last name 'Han'.
>> I am so happy to meet a person whose last name "Han".
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