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Are you a good patient when you're sick? Explain your answer.

차진혁/2025-03-23

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I'm not a good patient when my sick because health is very most important. But I think the sick is very dangerous.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below. Enjoy the rest of the day! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




                               
                              

                                   Are you a good patient when you're sick? Explain your answer.


I'm not a good patient when my sick because health is very most important. But I think the sick is very dangerous.
>> I'm not a good patient when I'm sick because although health is very important, I think being sick is very dangerous.



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