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My favorite activites for school.

김여운/2025-03-22

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Talking with my friens is my favorite activites for school. Because it can help to decrease my stress and feel happy. And my less like taking a P.E class, which class play badminton, table tennis with my friends. So, i like play with my friends everything. Friends are my best comfort people and they are my best friend.

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Hi, Chloe!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille

Talking with my friens is my favorite activites for school.

>> Talking with my friends is one of my favorite activities at school.

Because it can help to decrease my stress and feel happy.

>> That's because it can help lessen my stress and feel happy.

And my less like taking a P.E class, which class play badminton, table tennis with my friends.

>> And, my least favorite activity is the PE class wherein we play badminton and table tennis with my friends.

So, I like play with my friends everything.

>> So, I like playing and doing everything with my friends.

Friends are my best comfort people and they are my best friend.

>> CORRECT!