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What Korean culture or tradition would you like to continue to the next generation? Why?

한진원/2025-03-22

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I would like to pass the Korean language down to the next generation. we want to be proficient in English, but it is also important to preserve our own language. Sharing the same language is a powerful way to foster a shared spirit.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Racheal! This is a good one. Language will always be part of one's identity. Hopefully, in our pursuit for glabalization, younger generation still won't forget their own languages. See you!

--Teacher Anji

I would like to pass the Korean language down to the next generation.

>> CORRECT

we want to be proficient in English, but it is also important to preserve our own language.

>> we want to be proficient in English, but it is also important to preserve our own language.

Sharing the same language is a powerful way to foster a shared spirit.

>> CORRECT