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What's special about Busan?

차진혁/2025-03-20

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Busan is special because Busan ocean is very beautiful and Busan market is very famous. And Busan in the very good food
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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below. Have a good night's sleep! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




                               
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Busan is special because Busan ocean is very beautiful and Busan market is very famous.
>> Busan is special because the ocean is magnificent and the market is very famous.

And Busan in the very good food
>> And the food in the city is delectable. 

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