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Yes, I believe in ghosts.

유수빈/2025-03-17

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Yes, I believe in ghosts. When I was a high school student, I studied very hard during the exam period. So, I fell a sleep at the desk. Suddenly, I listened a man's voice. But, It wasn't my father, and brother's voice. I think it was a ghost's voice!!
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Kara! 

Your story is so creepy. 
Hearing a voice is really scary. 

Andrea 

Yes, I believe in ghosts.
>> Correct 

When I was a high school student, I studied very hard during the exam period.
>> Correct 

So, I fell a sleep at the desk. Suddenly, I listened a man's voice.
>> So fell asleep on the desk, then I heard a man's voice. 

But, It wasn't my father, and brother's voice. 
>> Butit wasn't my father's nor brother's voice. 

I think it was a ghost's voice!!
>> Correct 
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