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How do you recharge after socializing?

맹준영/2025-03-16

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
My personality is introvert. So. meeting friends or colleagues makes me tired. After meeting, I usually recharge my energy through exercise. MY favorite exercise is running. Running is good to spend many sweat. Sweating a lot will make me fresh. It is good for relieving stress. Always doing exercise is my goal. But It is so difficult.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Jun. You did a great job expressing your thoughts! I made some corrections to improve grammar and sentence flow. Your writing clearly conveys your feelings about social interactions and how you recharge. Keep practicing, and great work!

~ T. Lia

My personality is introvert. So. meeting friends or colleagues makes me tired.
>> My personality is introverted, so meeting friends or colleagues makes me feel tired.

After meeting, I usually recharge my energy through exercise.
>> After socializing, I usually recharge my energy through exercise.

MY favorite exercise is running. 
>> CORRECT

Running is good to spend many sweat.
>> Running helps me sweat a lot.

Sweating a lot will make me fresh. It is good for relieving stress.
>> Sweating makes me feel refreshed and helps relieve stress.

Always doing exercise is my goal. But It is so difficult.
>> Exercising regularly is my goal, but it is very challenging.

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