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I think the world has the best night sky is North Pole because the north pole has aurora so it is the best night sky

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Jean~~

Which place in the world has the best night sky? Why?

I think the world has the best night sky is North Pole because the north pole has aurora so it is the best night sky

>> I think the North Pole has the best night sky because you can see the aurora borealis.