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What are your thoughts on people who always check their weight?

차유진/2025-03-16

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I think thoughts on people always check their weight is it is okay because they are interested in health and I always check my weight.
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I think thoughts on people always check their weight is it is okay because they are interested in health and I always check my weight.
>> I think it's fine for people to always check their weight if the reason is that they are interested in their health. 
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