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How will you tell your friend that the food she prepared for 2 hours is not delicious?

이복희/2025-03-13

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If my friend gave me a food, but it was not delicious, l will say her 'thanks you'. And I will give her food that I made, it also might not delicious. I am carefully make food when I give someone. In fack I don't give someone food that I think it is not delicious. But l like that someone give a food. Almost this food is very delicious. Expeally my mom made food is very delicious. I want to get my mom's food.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Ms. Eva!  
In my case, I will honestly say that her food tastes a little different from my expectation. Maybe she needs to put a little more salt or sugar, it depends. In that way, I am giving her an honest feedback and she can do it better.  See you~
Aki~

If my friend gave me a food, but it was not delicious, l will say her 'thanks you'.
>>> If my friend gave me a food, but it was not delicious, I will still thank her.

And I will give her food that I made, it also might not delicious.
>>> And I will give her food that I made, it also might not be delicious.

I am carefully make food when I give someone.
>>> I am carefully making food when I give someone.
>> I am careful when I give someone some food.


In fack I don't give someone food that I think it is not delicious. But l like that someone give a food.
>> In fact, I don't give someone food that I think is not delicious. But I like that someone gives me food.

Almost this food is very delicious.
>>> Often, it is very delicious.

Expeally my mom made food is very delicious.
>>> Especially my mom's cooking.


I want to get my mom's food.
>>> I hope to get my mom's skill.
>>> I hope I have my mom's cooking skill.
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