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Taking a walk

한진원/2025-03-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

My best part of the day is taking a walk along English Bay. There are beautiful sunsets and a lot of people who exercise. I feel good ever time I go there.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Racheal! I can imagine how refreshing it must be to walk along a scenic bay. It invigorates both the body and mind. Please enjoy the experience. See you again!

--Teacher Anji

My best part of the day is taking a walk along English Bay.

>> The best part of my day is taking a walk along English Bay.

There are beautiful sunsets and a lot of people who exercise.

>> The sunset is beautiful and there are a lot of people exercising.

I feel good ever time I go there.

>> I feel good every time I go there.