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What are the most important healthcare issues in your country? The majority of doctors say that money doesn't work It does not establish a child department. It is very important issue near by the future.
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What are the most important healthcare issues in your country?
>>correct
The majority of doctors say that money doesn't work
>>Majority of the doctors say that money is useless.
It does not establish a child department.
>>It is not used in the Children's Department
It is very important issue near by the future.
>>It is a very important issue in the near future.
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