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How does your friend feel about his brother going to the army?

차진혁/2025-03-02

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
My friends is happy and sad because happy is my friend brother room is my friends room. But sad is brother is going to the army?
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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below. Have a good goodnight! 


Cheers,
Jean~~



                                      

                    

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My friends is happy and sad because happy is my friend brother room is my friends room.
>> My friend is happy and sad. Happy because he can occupy his brother's room. 

But sad is brother is going to the army?
>> But sad because his brother is leaving for the army. 
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