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김나은/2025-02-25

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During winter, I want to ski whit my friends. I get rest in my bed. I want to make big snowman.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Na Eun!

Thank you for doing your homework. I hope you do all the things you want to do and have a good time. :)

~ Trixia

CONTENT:

During winter, I want to ski whit my friends.

- During winter, I want to go skiing with my friends.

I get rest in my bed.

- After that, I like to rest in my bed.

I want to make big snowman.

- I also want to build a big snowman.