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차진혁/2025-04-29

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I think the Korean idols who become actors is it doesn't matter because it's free. So idols who become actors is it's doesn't matter.

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What are your thoughts on Korean idols who become actors?

I think the Korean idols who become actors is it doesn't matter because it's free.

So idols who become actors is it's doesn't matter.

>> I think Korean idols who become actors don’t really matter because it’s a free choice. So, idols who transition into acting don’t matter.

>> OR: Idols becoming actors isn’t a big deal to me, since everyone has the right to choose their path.