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What’s your favorite English word? Why?

한다연/2025-02-25

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
My favorite English word is 'Happy'. Because It is the positive word that gives me a power. It is the one of my life's purposes,too : To live happy life. Second, 'Happy' is my favorite music's title. When I listen to that music, I am very happy and get a power.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Nicole!
That is such a good choice of word. Just hearing this word makes me feel happy too haha. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate 

My favorite English word is 'Happy'. Because It is the positive word that gives me a power.
>>My favorite English word is 'Happy' because it is a positive word that gives me power.
It is the one of my life's purposes,too : To live happy life.
>>It is also one of my life's purposes: to live a happy life.
Second, 'Happy' is my favorite music's title.
>>Second, 'Happy' is the title of my favorite song.
When I listen to that music, I am very happy and get a power.
>>When I listen to that song, I feel very happy and gain energy.
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