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Do you think it's important for kids to choose early what they want to be when they grow up?

신봉규/2025-02-24

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think it's very important to support children in whatever they choose to do. I think it's good to be able to help them early
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi! I'm so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


I think it's very important to support children in whatever they choose to do. I think it's good to be able to help them early
>> I think it’s very important to support children in whatever they choose to do. It’s also beneficial to help them early on.
OR >> I believe it’s essential to support children in their choices and provide guidance early on, as it greatly benefits their growth and development.
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