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Describe a typical bedroom of a Korean student your age.

차유진/2025-02-24

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Describe typical bedroom 9f Korean student is dirty because they are eat a lot of snacks in bedroom end they are the clothes on the bed.
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Here's your corrected composition, Yale! Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. See you again on Wednesday! 


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Describe typical bedroom 9f Korean student is dirty because they are eat a lot of snacks in bedroom end they are the clothes on the bed.
>> A typical bedroom of a Korean student is dirty because students eat a lot of snacks in the bedroom and their clothes are on the bed.

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