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김나은/2025-02-24

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think that changing the world of an idea is not special. so I can think of an idea that changed the world. if an idea make people happier, It's an idea that changed the world.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

hi KIM NA EUN!

Thank you for doing your homework ^^

I think that changing the world of an idea is not special. so I can think of an idea that changed the world. if an idea make people happier, It's an idea that changed the world.

>> I think that changing the world with idea is not special. I think an idea can change the world. If an idea makes people happy, It's an idea that can change the world.