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How do you usually handle stress?
김승민/2025-02-20
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
When I get stress, I usually go to the gym and do hard work out.
There are many reasons why, but here is a couple.
First, I want to step back from the stress and think about more rational.
Next, Several hormones should be produced during exercising, making me feel delightful so I can relief my stress.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Seung Min!
Check out the correct vocabulary words.
You can see that they make more sense when put together.
Make sure to practice more.
Good job!^^
~ Teacher Sharon
When I get stress, I usually go to the gym and do hard work out.
>> When I get stressed, I usually go to the gym and do a hard workout.
There are many reasons why, but here is a couple.
There are many reasons why, but here is a couple.
>> There are many reasons why, but here are a couple.
First, I want to step back from the stress and think about more rational.
First, I want to step back from the stress and think about more rational.
>> First, I want to step back from the stress and think more rationally.
Next, Several hormones should be produced during exercising, making me feel delightful so I can relief my stress.
Next, Several hormones should be produced during exercising, making me feel delightful so I can relief my stress.
>> Next, several hormones are produced during exercise, making me feel delighted, so I can relieve my stress.
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