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Do you think listening to sad music when you're feeling down actually helps?

이현준/2025-02-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
When I feel sad, to listening sad music is bad. Because when I listening to sad music,i feel more depressed.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi there again, Jun!
Thanks for doing your homework.
Are you preparing for school already? I've noticed that you put your class on hold. Well, don't stop practicing English for your improvement.
Take care!
T. Aki~

When I feel sad, to listening sad music is bad. Because when I listening to sad music,i feel more depressed.
>>> When I feel sad, listening to sad music is not good for me because it makes me feel more depressed.
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