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홍하은/2025-02-19

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When I get back home, I have to study for Toiec. Also, I have to pack some stuffs because I will go to school dormitory from next semester. Maybe I need to make some To do list for it. I like to write to-do list while study.It makes me realize what I have done and what I have to do. Watching a list which I have done makes me full of accomplishment and confidence.

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Hannah,

Thanks for doing your homework. I agree, a to-do list really helps!

-Teacher Ash

When I get back home, I have to study for Toiec.

>> When I get back home, I have to study for the TOEIC test.

Also, I have to pack some stuffs because I will go to school dormitory from next semester.

>> Also, I have to pack some stuff because I will go to the school dormitory next semester.

Maybe I need to make some To do list for it.

>> Maybe I need to make a to-do list for it.

I like to write to-do list while study.

>> I like to write a to-do list while studying.

It makes me realize what I have done and what I have to do.

>> It allows me to track tasks that I have completed and tasks that are pending.

Watching a list which I have done makes me full of accomplishment and confidence.

>> Completing my to-do list makes me feel accomplished and makes me more confident.