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Describe tulips.
유수빈/2025-02-19
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Tulip has various color(red, pink, white, yellow, etc.).
Each color has different meanings. For example, the red color has meaning of love, the white color has meaning of forgiveness.
Also, the petals are made up of many layers, so it looks like the shape of an onion.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Kara!
Each color has different meanings.
Also, the petals are made up of many layers, so it looks like the shape of an onion.
Tulip is really expensive here in the Philippines.
I consider it as a fancy flower.
It is so pretty and elegant.
Andrea
Tulip has various color(red, pink, white, yellow, etc.).
>> Tulip has various colors (red, pink, white, yellow, etc.).
Each color has different meanings.
>> Correct
For example, the red color has meaning of love, the white color has meaning of forgiveness.
>> For example, red means love, while white means forgiveness.
Also, the petals are made up of many layers, so it looks like the shape of an onion.
>> Also, the petals are made up of many layers, so it looks like an onion.
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