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What are your thoughts on tall people becoming basketball players just because of their height advan

차유진/2025-02-19

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I think it'snot good because they are maybe dont want a basketball player and they had no choice but to do it because they was tall.
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I think it's not good because they are maybe dont want a basketball player and they had no choice but to do it because they was tall.
>> I think it's not good because maybe they don't want to be a basketball player and have no choice but to do it because they are tall.
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