ESSAY: Some people believe that nowadays too much money is being spent on weddings and birthdays. Why do you think it is happening? What can be done to improve the situation? Because many people think quality is more important than truth. People in the past put more importance on mental value than material value. Even if I was short of money, I thought it would be enough if I had a lot of love, but now that thought has disappeared a lot. So I think this situation happened.

Hi there Lee! Thanks for doing your homework.  Your argument is nice, although it could be enhanced by offering a more specific statement to provide a clear direction for the essay.