POWER ENGLISH

현재위치

> 영작교정 첨삭 서비스

Does a buffet promote overconsumption?

박혜진/2025-02-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Whether a buffet promotes overconsumption depends on the person. In my case, I can't eat a large amount of food at a buffet, so it’s actually overspending for me. However, for those who can eat more than what they paid for, a buffet could be a smart strategy to save money.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Jinnie!

While buffets can be convenient and offer a variety of options, they do carry the risk of encouraging eating beyond one’s hunger level.

But I am happy to know that you can control yourself when you are eating in a buffet.

Have a great night!

Aki~

Whether a buffet promotes overconsumption depends on the person.

>>> CORRECT!

In my case, I can't eat a large amount of food at a buffet, so it’s actually overspending for me.

>>> CORRECT!

OR >> In my case, I can't eat a large amount of food at a buffet, so it’s literally overspending for me.

However, for those who can eat more than what they paid for, a buffet could be a smart strategy to save money.

>>> CORRECT!