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Future travel plan

홍하은/2025-02-06

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In the future, I want to travel to Egypt. I heard that there are a lot of archaeological architecture and remains if ancient city. I want to visit museum in Cairo and appreciate stone statues and mummies. In addition, I want to tour inside the Pyramid and ride camel. I know it is little bit dangerous place to travel alone, so I will travel through travel assistance company. p.s.) I didn't know that there is place to upload the homework. I'm sorry :(

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi,

No problem. I forgot to tell you about this earlier, so no worries. ^^

I'd love to go to Egypt as well. I love historical sites too!

-Teacher Ash

In the future, I want to travel to Egypt.

>> CORRECT

I heard that there are a lot of archaeological architecture and remains if ancient city.

>> I heard that there are a lot of archaeological architecture and remains of the ancient city.

I want to visit museum in Cairo and appreciate stone statues and mummies.

>> I want to visit the museum in Cairo and appreciate the stone statues and mummies.

In addition, I want to tour inside the Pyramid and ride camel.

>> In addition to that, I also want to tour inside the Pyramid and ride a camel.

I know it is little bit dangerous place to travel alone, so I will travel through travel assistance company.

>> I know it is little bit dangerous to travel the place alone, so I will travel through a travel agency.