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이유민/2025-01-17

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

How do you deal with your mistakes? First, if someone suffer damage because I make a mistake, I will apologize. Then I fix a mistake. And if I can afford it, I will regret my mistakes and make note so as not to repeat it again

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ms. Yumin! I agree with you. Taking action to correct the mistake shows accountability and helps to repair any damage done.

-T. Sonny
First, if someone suffer damage because I make a mistake, I will apologize.

>>First, if I caused any damage through my mistake, I will sincerely apologize.
Then I fix a mistake.

>>Then, I will resolve my mistake.
And if I can afford it, I will regret my mistakes and make note so as not to repeat it again

>>If I am able, I will reflect on my mistakes and ensure I don't repeat them.