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The homework of 16th Jan.

조윤호/2025-01-17

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Writing task: When was the last time you thought you did your best but realized you could do better? A : It was the time when i had a test called TOEIC. TOEIC is a english test in the Korea. I got a score 850 at 3 years ago. The total score of TOEIC is 990. When i got that score, i thought i did my best at that time. However, as i learning English by video call now, i think i could get a better score if i got a video call study earlier. I am learning many things from you. Thank you always.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Mr. Eddie! Your TOEIC score is impressive. Also, I appreciate your kind words. Thank you for doing your best and actively participating in class. Your dedication is inspiring.

-T. Sonny
It was the time when i had a test called TOEIC.

>>It was the time when I had a test called TOEIC.

TOEIC is a english test in the Korea.

>>TOEIC is an English test in Korea.

I got a score 850 at 3 years ago.

>>I got a score of 850 three years ago.

The total score of TOEIC is 990.

>>Correct!

When i got that score, i thought i did my best at that time.

>>When I got that score, I thought I did my best that time.

However, as i learning English by video call now, i think i could get a better score if i got a video call study earlier.

>>However, as I learn English through video classes, I think I could have gotten a better score if I had done this before.
I am learning many things from you.

>>Correct!

Thank you always.

>>Much appreciated, always.