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Write about your best day last week.

차진혁/2025-01-14

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I think the best day last week is start the my school winter vacation because it is very fun. But it's a shame.

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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy. Please go over the revisions given below. Enjoy the rest of your evening!

Cheers,

Jean~~

Write about your best day last week.

I think the best day last week is start the my school winter vacation because it is very fun.

>> I think the best day last week was start the of my school winter vacation because it was really fun.

But it's a shame.

>> CORRECT~~

>> [NOTE: THIS IS GRAMMATICAL BUT IT DOES NOT FIT THE FIRST SENTENCE. THEY ARE CONTRADICTORY BECAUSE YOU MENTIONED IN THE FIRST SENTENCE THAT IT WAS FUN BUT CALL IT A SHAME IN THE 2ND SENTENCE, THEREFORE, IT GOT ME CONFUSED.]