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Do you want to be a firefighter?

송명자/2025-01-14

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I want to, though. I think firefighters need to be responsible and selfless. These qualities are not easy, and that's why it's meaningful. It's something I need to work on.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Miss Song,

Firefighters are the bravest people.

I hope that all firefighters, especially the ones from Los Angeles, will be safe.

Andrea

I want to, though.

>> I want to.

I think firefighters need to be responsible and selfless.

>> Correct

These qualities are not easy, and that's why it's meaningful.

>> Correct

It's something I need to work on.

>> Correct