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Have you tried feeding a giraffe?

유수빈/2025-01-13

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
No, I don't have tried feeding a giraffe. When I go to amusement park, I often go to the zoo in there. But, I've never tried feeding a giraffe, because it was too tall and huge, so I was scared. I like just watching animals.
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Hi Kara! ^^ 

I agree that giraffes are pretty cute but also scary. 
I have seen many videos of people feeding the giraffes. 
The giraffes don't seem to be dangerous. 

Andrea 

No, I don't have tried feeding a giraffe.
>> Correct 

When I go to amusement park, I often go to the zoo in there.
>> When I go to an amusement park, I often go to the zoo. 

But, I've never tried feeding a giraffe, because it was too tall and huge, so I was scared.
>> I never tried feeding a giraffe, though because it's too tall and huge so I was scared.  

I like just watching animals.
>> I just like looking at the animals. 

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