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Do you think bullying should be considered a crime, or is it part of growing up? : I think bullying should be considered. Bullying can be a joke for someone. However It is considered inconvenient to others. So, It is important to educate from an early age.
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Hello Chris,


It is important to make an effort to step forward in learning new things so that we can apply it our daily life.

T. Jeny


 I think bullying should be considered.
>>I think bullying should be considered as a crime.
Bullying can be a joke for someone.
>>correct
However it is considered inconvenient to others.
>>However, it is inconvenient to others.
So, It is important to educate from an early age.
>>correct
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