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The homework of 13th Jan.

조윤호/2025-01-14

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Writing task: Have you considered running your own business? What kind of business would you like to run? A : No. I never consider running my own business. Because i get stress from encounting people, i have not considered running my own business. But, if i have to run my own business, i want to be a boss of cafeteria. Because i worked at cafe and my friends alreay running cafe, i have a lot of benefit to start that business. But as i said before, i do not want to be a boss.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Mr. Eddie! I've seen a lot of videos on YouTube about running a cafe and although it looks fun, I know that it could be stressful in realitylike any other businesses. 
-T. Sonny
No. I never consider running my own business.
>>No. I have never considered running my own business.
Because i get stress from encounting people, i have not considered running my own business.
>>It's because I get stressed from interacting with people.
But, if i have to run my own business, i want to be a boss of cafeteria.
>>But, if I had to run my own business, I would own a cafeteria.
Because i worked at cafe and my friends alreay running cafe, i have a lot of benefit to start that business.
>>It's because I worked at a cafe and some of my friends are already running cafes so it would be very beneficial to start the same business.
But as i said before, i do not want to be a boss.
>>But as I have stated earlier, I do not want to be a boss.
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