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Are you excited about anything coming up soon?

이진태/2025-01-09

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Most of unexpected something cause anxiety. In the Economic, it called "Risk". I either doesn't like risk and want a stable circumstance.
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Hi there! It’s great to see you completed the homework. You shared your ideas beautifully—keep up the amazing work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

Most of unexpected something cause anxiety.
>> Most unexpected events cause anxiety.

In the Economic, it called "Risk".
>> In economics, this is called 'risk.'

I either doesn't like risk and want a stable circumstance.
>> I also don’t like risk and prefer a stable environment.
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