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What are your thoughts on the National Assembly in your country?

차진혁/2025-01-09

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I think the National Assembly in the county is Normal because it is on institution representing our my country. But National Assembly people is not work for my country people.

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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy. Please go over the revisions given below. Have a good afternoon there!

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Jean~~

What are your thoughts on the National Assembly in your country?

I think the National Assembly in the county is Normal because it is on institution representing our my country.

>> I think the National Assembly is normal because it is an institution representing our country.

But National Assembly people is not work for my country people.

>> But the members of the National Assembly do not do their best for the people.