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임현실/2025-01-07

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I'm afraid of long plane, so I never thought about it, but I wish I could make phone calls on the plane. I also wish I could exercise.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Lily!

It's my first time knowing that you are afraid of long flights. Anyway, I agree! Being able to exercise or having a lounge area would be nice on a plane.

- T. Caitlyn

I'm afraid of long plane, so I never thought about it, but I wish I could make phone calls on the plane.

>> I'm afraid of long flights, so I never thought about it, but I wish I could make phone calls on the plane.

I also wish I could exercise.

>> CORRECT