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What cheers you up when you are sad?

이진태/2025-01-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
When I feel sad or gloomy, I watch comedy show I like. I watched many times actually, however it still funny for me. After then I feel better.
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Hi! I’m thrilled that you took the time to complete the homework. Your experiences and ideas were shared wonderfully—keep up the fantastic work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

When I feel sad or gloomy, I watch comedy show I like.
>> When I feel sad or gloomy, I watch a comedy show I like.

I watched many times actually, however it still funny for me.
>> I’ve watched it many times, but it’s still funny to me. 

After then I feel better.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Afterward, I feel better.
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