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Are there things/people at work that distract you so much that you struggle to get things done?

이진태/2025-01-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

There is a newcomer in my company. she is young and too distracted. In a good way, she is energetic, In a bad way, she looks like child not businessman. she sometimes disturb my task.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello! I'm so glad you made the effort to finish the homework. You did an outstanding job expressing your thoughts—keep up the excellent work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

There is a newcomer in my company. she is young and too distracted.
>> There is a newcomer at my company. She is young and easily distracted.

In a good way, she is energetic, In a bad way, she looks like child not businessman.
>> In a good way, she is energetic; in a bad way, she seems more like a child than a businessperson.

she sometimes disturb my task.
>> Sometimes, she disturbs my work.