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Is there anything that makes you learn better?

이진태/2025-01-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
When I prepared moving new company, I had powerful motivation. Because, if I'm fluent for English, it is advantages for the hiring. Like this, If study is linked with achievement directly, we can see powerful motivation.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi there! It’s great to see you completed the homework. You shared your ideas beautifully—keep up the amazing work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

When I prepared moving new company, I had powerful motivation.
>> When I was preparing to move to a new company, I had strong motivation.

Because, if I'm fluent for English, it is advantages for the hiring.
>> This was because being fluent in English gives an advantage in the hiring process.

Like this, If study is linked with achievement directly, we can see powerful motivation.
>> Similarly, when studying is directly linked to achievement, it creates powerful motivation.
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