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What would you say if you could talk to your future self?

이진태/2025-01-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If I could say to my future self, I would say be enjoy and relax. I think I was too nervous when I was younger, I sould have relaxed.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi! I’m delighted you dedicated time to completing the homework. You did a wonderful job expressing your experiences—keep up the great effort!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


If I could say to my future self, I would say be enjoy and relax.
>> If I could speak to my future self, I would say, 'Enjoy and relax.' 

I think I was too nervous when I was younger, I sould have relaxed.
>> I think I was too nervous when I was younger; I should have relaxed.
OR >> I believe I was too anxious when I was younger; I should have taken it easy.
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