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Do you think dancing is a good workout? Why?

차진혁/2025-01-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think dacing is a good workout because dancing is lose weight. And Dancing is makes people's bodies healthy.
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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below. Have a good night's sleep! 


Cheers,
Jean~~



                       

                               Do you think dancing is a good workout? Why?


I think dacing is a good workout because dancing is lose weight.
>> I think dancing is a good workout because it helps us lose weight.

And Dancing is makes people's bodies healthy.
>> And dancing makes our body healthy. 
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