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What are you looking forward to this 2025? Why?

차유진/2025-01-07

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I looking forward 2025 to vacation because now is vacation and I want enjoy 2025 so I looking forward to vacation and I looking forward to my birthday because every year my birthday is happy!
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Cheers,
Jean~~



                                     

                             
                                              What are you looking forward to this 2025? Why?


I looking forward 2025 to vacation because now is vacation and I want enjoy 2025 so I looking forward to vacation and I looking forward to my birthday because every year my birthday is happy!
>> I'm looking forward to my vacation this 2025 because we're currently on winter break and I want to enjoy this year. Another thing I'm looking forward to is my birthday because I'm happy every year when I celebrate my birthday. 
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