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Who do you think was the best president in your country?

차유진/2025-01-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think the best president in my country is Moon-jae in because he is like children. The worst president is Chun doo-hwan because he is killed people.
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Cheers,
Jean~~



                                     

                             
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I think the best president in my country is Moon-jae in because he is like children.
>>> I think the best president in my country is Moon Jae-In because he likes children.

The worst president is Chun doo-hwan because he is killed people.
>>> The worst president is Chun Doo-Hwan because he killed people.
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