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What are the top two things you can't do without any help?

차진혁/2025-01-05

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The top two things you can't do without any help First, swimming because children is very hard. Second, going to the another country because airplane is very expensive.
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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below. Have a good evening! 


Cheers,
Jean~~



                       

                               
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The top two things you can't do without any help First, swimming because children is very hard.
>>> The top two things I can't do without any help are the following: First, swimming because it's very hard for children to do it without any help.

Second, going to the another country because airplane is very expensive.
>>> Second, going to another country because air tickets are very expensive.

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