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임현실/2025-01-02

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I need to charge the camera battery. If it is not charged, I will not be able to use the camera.

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Hi, Lily!

You are right! A lot of people make the mistake of not charging their camera battery, so when they need it, they cannot use it, which is really a frustrating situation that can ruin one's trip. Wonderful job on your sentences, by the way!

-T. Caitlyn

I need to charge the camera battery.

>> CORRECT

If it is not charged, I will not be able to use the camera.

>> CORRECT